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DUDE, these are funny for a n00b! I love the subtle humor. Awesome!

they were prettay good id say

i like 'em, too, especially the alien one. but (to add some constructive criticism so you don't get away with nothing but strangers' lips suctioning your nether regions) the timing's still off. so, if you want to work on improving the humor, work on the timing. (of course, it's much easier to be a critic than a comic.)

Thank you kindly for the comments, folks.

Regarding "timing", I'm not sure what you mean by that. Could you please give me a few links to comic strips that show this type of timing in the humor so I can understand what you mean? I'd appreciate it. Thanks.

Way better than my early comics. Nice.

Thanks. I just finished enjoying the one you did on the Home Shopping Commercial Physics. Then I clicked on the dropdown menu and saw the list of others you did. Wow. I don't know if I'll ever be able to come up with enough ideas to write as many strips as you have, but we'll see what happens a few months from now.

for timing, see nicejohnson's passionate penguin:
http://www.stripcreator.com/comics/nicejohnson

Yep. That Passionate Penguin one is damn good. I'd rate it 5 stars out of 5.

the aliens and the gay cowboys exhibit the best timing because the last frame wasn't as predictable (although always viable) prior to its viewing. however, the merlin one had the baby as a likely answer to the joke from the start (the timing's off because the joke's punchline is answered early), and the lesbians one was set up too obviously in the second frame (the joke's punchline was answered in the second frame: timing's off). i hope that clarifies what i mean by "timing."

anyway, like i said, though, your comics are good. i'm just offering something constructive. keep up the good work.

Thats what your dropdown list will prolly look like in 4 months! After all, you are a better n00b than I!

You have to understand as well there's more dog poo than gold in my comics...especially the earlier ones.

You'll prolly make more gold if you take advice from a lot of the oldbies and read lotz of comics of others to get the feel of the site better. I stayed isolated for about 2 months on this site. That in combination with my own lack of writing skills (I mean writing plots) lead to so much bloodshed and doggie poo.

I did one more:

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Now I shall call it a night and turn in. Good night, folks. I'll check back here tomorrow to see what other entertaining comic strips you can create.

I thought it would be fun to do a series, so here's Part 1:

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The story of Geek Boy seeking love continues:

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That seemed unnessecary.

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Um dude....Where do I start? This is kind of like the movie Darkness Falls...Great ideas and plot but the acting and special effects screwed it up. Basically: Good idea for a series, good plot, bad punchlines. Work on that. There's no funny, really, but potential funniness. It's like you're holding back or something.

Thank you kindly, nicejohnson. Actually, since "Geek Boy Seeks Love" is becoming one of those "soap opera type" comic strips (like Rex Morgan, M.D., for example) as Geek Boy discovers his sexual orientation, there won't always be funny punchlines throughout the strips.

Good thing I don't plan to quit my day job, huh?

Gee, this is such a fun site! I've spent most of my day here on it, while hubby is away at a Super Bowl party.

Cheers!
~Jeanster

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I liked 'em, IMO. I wouldn't say the humor isn't there, it's just subtle...which is exactly the kind of comics *I* dig. Nice work.

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Thank you kindly, niteowl. After I read a couple of your series (Space Adventure and A Holiday Special), I added your name to my list of favorites.

I look forward to reading your other series tonight.

niteowl, I finished reading your series! I love those! Brilliant!

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ooooh, the torrid homosexual love affair is about to begin!!!!! this is getting too hot for anything but FOX. where's my popcorn...

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Cheers!
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I am picking up a vague 'stop calling me dude' vibe here. Correct me if I am wrong. Actually din't correct me, I am not too good with critisism.

Jeanster please read my convertible school bus series. I was like you, when I first started I wondered how in the hell some of these guys had hundreds of strips, but now I have over a hundred, it's like they are making themselves somehow, or maybe I have a team of comedy(ish) writers chained to radiators in my basement. 'Jim Davis can't come to the phone right now'.

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I like the last two strips a lot better. Good job! and yes, when I said dude I meant it in general, not literally or whatever.

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Hi, graykane. I sure do wish I could have continued this comic strip even further. But I couldn't find anymore images of Geek Boy, such as one where he's wearing only underwear. Hahaha. Oh, well.

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It's "the" spelled wrong.

I always thought it was "hdb!" spelled wrong.

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AAAAAaaahhhhh! A n00b love-fest! GAAAAK!

jean, are you sure your not on PCP?

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this is a really good series. i might have to cut a hole in the bottom of my popcorn bucket to finish reading.

old jokes never die. they're immune to AIDS.

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I liked 'em, IMO. I wouldn't say the humor isn't there, it's just subtle...which is exactly the kind of comics *I* dig. Nice work.

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niteowl, I finished reading your series! I love those! Brilliant!

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