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valuedan
Stripcreator Newbie

These are my attempts at making comics. Opinions?

4-28-04 12:40am (new)
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Floyd10
Junior Comic Technician

They're ok

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God Is A Bird... Do you believe in god?

4-28-04 5:59am (new)
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OMG_DaGmAr_6481987
Stripcreator Regular

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So am I.

4-28-04 6:27am (new)
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biped
Mr. Wonderful

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Are you making comics now?

Are you making comics now?

Are you making comics now?

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

4-28-04 6:48am (new)
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valuedan
Stripcreator Newbie

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YES

4-28-04 7:42pm (new)
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NooniePuuBunny
Horny Female Tentacled Kaiju from Outer Space

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How about now?

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I will rate you hard, and unendingly.

4-28-04 8:19pm (new)
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valuedan
Stripcreator Newbie

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N.. Yes! Stop asking that! I'm making comics! MAKING!

4-28-04 10:20pm (new)
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valuedan
Stripcreator Newbie

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4-28-04 11:34pm (new)
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MikeyG
Shoots the shit and often misses

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Um....no.

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The giant three-phallused phallus of Uzbekistan will one day squirt the cosmic jizz of revenge all over Canada.

4-29-04 6:13am (new)
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Mr. Wonderful

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You are feeling out the characters and situations and getting used to working with them, and laying the groundwork for potentially better comics to come.

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

4-29-04 6:56am (new)
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MikeyG
Shoots the shit and often misses

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And stop using the goddamn dog on ball.

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The giant three-phallused phallus of Uzbekistan will one day squirt the cosmic jizz of revenge all over Canada.

4-29-04 7:00am (new)
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valuedan
Stripcreator Newbie

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You are a cruel man, MikeyG, cruel to the bone. Cold as ice, you are.

4-29-04 12:03pm (new)
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NooniePuuBunny
Horny Female Tentacled Kaiju from Outer Space

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With bad grammar, you post.

With bad taste, makes you comics. Need better coherence, they do. Funny they do need. Make no sense, they do. You can improve I do think. Do or do not, there is no try.

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I will rate you hard, and unendingly.

4-29-04 8:48pm (new)
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biped
Mr. Wonderful

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More Dog On Ball!

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

4-29-04 9:00pm (new)
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CowTipper
Impressionable Adolescent

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With bad grammar, you post.

With bad taste, makes you comics. Need better coherence, they do. Funny they do need. Make no sense, they do. You can improve I do think. Do or do not, there is no try.



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I think, therefore I make comments on a forum.

4-29-04 9:04pm (new)
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valuedan
Stripcreator Newbie

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With bad grammar, you post.

With bad taste, makes you comics. Need better coherence, they do. Funny they do need. Make no sense, they do. You can improve I do think. Do or do not, there is no try.


YOU criticize ME? I don't find YOUR comics particularly funny either, but you don't see ME nitpicking them ("where's the p?") You... you... BRGHRHGHghGH!

I'm sorry if absurdist humor is not your cup o' tea, but those are the breaks, I suppose. It's a style. I aint changing, not for you, not for smiling George Bush, not for NO ONE.
I aint changing my double negatives, neither! Nope!

4-29-04 9:30pm (new)
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Jdude
Stripcreator Newbie

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I like them... they're like white ninja and achewood COMBINED!

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Touch the Puppet head.

4-29-04 9:34pm (new)
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NooniePuuBunny
Horny Female Tentacled Kaiju from Outer Space

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With bad grammar, you post.

With bad taste, makes you comics. Need better coherence, they do. Funny they do need. Make no sense, they do. You can improve I do think. Do or do not, there is no try.


YOU criticize ME? I don't find YOUR comics particularly funny either, but you don't see ME nitpicking them ("where's the p?") You... you... BRGHRHGHghGH!

I'm sorry if absurdist humor is not your cup o' tea, but those are the breaks, I suppose. It's a style. I aint changing, not for you, not for smiling George Bush, not for NO ONE.
I aint changing my double negatives, neither! Nope!


^-^ It was a combo of constructive criticism and a joke all in one. Rarely do I ever post any kind of criticism or comment toward a particular comment (I'm usually interacting with someoene else).

You're right, I'm not really an absurdist. I'm a surrealist.

BTW: If you thought my post was nitpicky, you've really only hit the tip of the ice berg. ^-^ Just a warning, not an attack on your comics or a suggestion on what you should do with them. Tis a cruel world here... Specially for nonpaying newbies with comics that don't float the boat of the paying regulars. So be prepared for much much more. I've been here since October of 2003 and I still get no respect (I myself being a non-paying semi-newb with sucky comics after all...not to mention I tend to lose my temper at people's behavior at times...so I really dont have much going for me)...

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I will rate you hard, and unendingly.

4-29-04 9:58pm (new)
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valuedan
Stripcreator Newbie

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If not for the word "improve," that would have been quite the insulting post, and I'm not sure if the addition of that word exactly launched your comic into the realm of "constructive criticism." Also, that joke hurt me in a way I've never been hurt before, and the pain will linger on until my death. I'll look the other way, though, for the sake of human decency, and because I'm so cool (you can feel the coolness through your monitor).

And Jdude is right, by the way. In fact, two of my major influences ARE www.whiteninjacomics.com and www.achewood.com. Also, Michael Kupperman's "Snake n' Bacon" seem to have had a major effect on me, along with (to a lesser extent) Tony Millionare's "Maakies."

4-29-04 10:14pm (new)
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biped
Mr. Wonderful

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

4-29-04 10:21pm (new)
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valuedan
Stripcreator Newbie

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That was 100% in the hizzy.

4-29-04 10:27pm (new)
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valuedan
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4-29-04 10:34pm (new)
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valuedan
Stripcreator Newbie

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4-30-04 12:01am (new)
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