I'm new here...thanks for any replies.I have 7 comics.

http://www.stripcreator.com/comics/BMJ

Let's pretend I knew there was already a link to my comics under my message and forget the link that I posted.

You don't always have to state who is talking.

I know, I just like it better that way. I'll probably stop eventually.

Needs more Oggy...

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[i]You're born alone -- You die alone -- But still we live on.[br] Yesterday is a memory -- Tomorrow is a vision -- But today... It's a bitch[/i] Zug Izland - "Life"

I agree with Match--putting the name of the character at the beginning of the dialog box is distracting and redundant. We know who is talking because there are only two characters and each one has their own dialog box with a convenient arrow pointing to the character speaking.

"My face is bleeding."

Actually made me laugh to some extent. But yes, stop with the names, it's confusing and silly.

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I am not 16 going on not 17, I know that I'm naive.

Not too bad.

"I'm think going to go adopt a child and love him and pet him."

Maybe not gramatically correct...but this is a great line.

*adds an "I'm" to that sentence while you're not looking*

quote:

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"I'm think going to go adopt a child and love him and pet him."

Maybe not gramatically correct...but this is a great line.

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Wow...I am noton top of things today.

*erases the "'m" from the first "I'm"*

"Noton"? Is that a contraction of "not a futon"?

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

Yes.

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I think, therefore I make comments on a forum.

I give up.

*kicks self in the face*

Those are awfully flexible legs.

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Blue is the color of victory.

I take Yoga.

"Yoga"? Is that like a cross between Yoda and Yogi Bear?

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

Hungry I am, a picnic basket I want, Boo-Boo.

Going to like this Mr. Forest Ranger is not, Yogi.

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

Use the forks, Boo-book, use the forks.

Or was that Yogi-Wan?

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ken.kaufman@gmail.com

You have much potential, young one. If you cease with the "name-" format, all funny might be restored to your comics again ... maybe ...

... if I feel like laughing ...

... ha ...

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"AthiestDiary, you rock." - MikeyG (I'm LOVED! HOORAH!)

THAT'S IT! NO...MORE...NAMES!

HAPPY?!

I think you should get rid of that "name-" thing. I don't know if anyone's brought that up yet.

Also if you want to know how to make a line down the center of a panel, I can tell you how to do that.

Um, moving past inside jokes to actual criticism, your first few strips were a little random for my tastes. The bully series was okay, but not hilarious; I guess it was just nothing we haven't seen before. Put a new face on it, make it unique and interesting somehow.

And write some new stuff. You've been silent for a couple of days. Give us more to criticize! I have a feeling you could turn out to be pretty good with a little practice.

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The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!

I'm letting my creative juices flow. That takes time.

That means I have no ideas right now.