I haven't been here in a LONG time but I think I took more time and humor on these.
If you hadn't read my series please start at the beginning or 10# because 1# is at MDMM(My old one)
Well heres the new ones.
I'm not sure if all of them will show up but please read and rate. I'm trying to bring back my series that ended pretty bad and return it into great humor.
Thanks.
-MDMM (Life_Is_Life)
In my opinion, the randomness is usually pretty solidly funny, but it retracts a bit from the overall flow of the story as a whole. Work on implementing the same good randomness you posess into a more fluid encompassing story line. (the randomness would be better in individual comics)
Out of 10, you get an 8, just work on comic to comic flow :)
Thanks man, that kind of encouragement helps a person. Sorry if my post was jumbled... i have dual-essays due to mmorow that im working on. What i was saying is that you present the funny part of your comics through random things, and the randomness is funny. What it is lacking is smooth transitions from comic to comic, that really make a series stand together better, like Megatokyo. It has plenty of randomness and one liner's, but it still pulls off a smoothly transitioning story at the same time.