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Life_Is_Life
Junior Comic Technician

Member Rated:

I haven't been here in a LONG time but I think I took more time and humor on these.
If you hadn't read my series please start at the beginning or 10# because 1# is at MDMM(My old one)
Well heres the new ones.

Dumb Blonde Adventures: World Domination by Life_Is_Life
11-21-04
Dumb Blonde Adventures
Finaly! We defeated the Blonde! Theres only one thing left to do...
Dominate the rest of the world?
Dumb Blonde Adventures
I was thinking retirement but thats good too.
Sweet.
Dumb Blonde Adventures
Lets start with France...
No...They creep me out...

Dumb Blonde Adventures:Xtof saves the day! by Life_Is_Life
11-21-04
Dumb Blonde Adventures
Hello,Squrrel-X.
Oh crap.
Dumb Blonde Adventures
Should I end this quick & Painless or Slow & painful?
Can't we all just get along?
Dumb Blonde Adventures
No. Not really.
Then Quick so I can gather up another army...

Dumb Blonde Adventures: Thanking Xtof by Life_Is_Life
11-21-04
Dumb Blonde Adventures
Thanks for helping.
No prob. Ready to find another headband?
Dumb Blonde Adventures
Sure but lets first find Eric.
Why?
Dumb Blonde Adventures
Because hes our freind.
Hey, Speak for yourself!

Dumb Blonde Adventures: Stacie's Pa is on the loose by Life_Is_Life
11-21-04
Dumb Blonde Adventures
Before we continue the search, your father is attacking people downtown.
So? He does this every teusday.
Dumb Blonde Adventures
We still should stop him.
Fine!
Dumb Blonde Adventures
God. My dad starts killing in public and everyone thinks hes evil...

Dumb Blonde Adventures: Stress sucks by Life_Is_Life
11-21-04
Dumb Blonde Adventures
What are you doing here,sweetie?
I came to tell you to stop killing.
Dumb Blonde Adventures
But I do this every teusday. To releive stress and stuff.
I know.
Dumb Blonde Adventures
But Eric thinks Killing is 'wrong'. and I don't want to hear him whine...

[Click to view comic: 'Dumb Blonde Adventures: Listening sucks,too']

[Click to view comic: 'Dumb Blonde Adventures: 2 days saved in a row!!']

[Click to view comic: 'Dumb Blonde Adventures:Go Packers']

[Click to view comic: 'Dumb Blonde Adventures:Poor poor Fluffy']

[Click to view comic: 'Dumb Blonde Adventures:Vigor finds Xtof']

[Click to view comic: 'Dumb Blonde Adventures:A weird Addiction']

[Click to view comic: 'Dumb Blonde Adventures: Teusdays bad for me']

I'm not sure if all of them will show up but please read and rate. I'm trying to bring back my series that ended pretty bad and return it into great humor.
Thanks.
-MDMM (Life_Is_Life)

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Moo?

11-22-04 6:02pm (new)
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Life_Is_Life
Junior Comic Technician

Member Rated:

Can someone please rate me?

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Moo?

11-22-04 6:56pm (new)
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ReiWonr
Stripcreator Newbie

Member Rated:

In my opinion, the randomness is usually pretty solidly funny, but it retracts a bit from the overall flow of the story as a whole. Work on implementing the same good randomness you posess into a more fluid encompassing story line. (the randomness would be better in individual comics)

Out of 10, you get an 8, just work on comic to comic flow :)

11-22-04 7:34pm (new)
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Life_Is_Life
Junior Comic Technician

Member Rated:

Thanks. Although i'm confused i feel good about the 8.
I love your comics by the way.

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Moo?

11-22-04 7:47pm (new)
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ReiWonr
Stripcreator Newbie

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Thanks man, that kind of encouragement helps a person. Sorry if my post was jumbled... i have dual-essays due to mmorow that im working on. What i was saying is that you present the funny part of your comics through random things, and the randomness is funny. What it is lacking is smooth transitions from comic to comic, that really make a series stand together better, like Megatokyo. It has plenty of randomness and one liner's, but it still pulls off a smoothly transitioning story at the same time.

11-22-04 7:50pm (new)
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TheBigJE
I Slayed Ganon. Seriously. He's fucking dead.

Member Rated:

j00 R both shite! LOOLOLOL

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11-29-04 6:26pm (new)
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