Could you please read or rate or critique my comics? thank you very much.

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Fear my Scandinavian fanboys. Ja, men bare i Oslo!

What did you say?

That is what I said. Or would you rather me post them in here so you don't have to go through the effort to link them?

[Click to view comic: 'Asymptotic Notation's Scandinavian fanboys.']

[Click to view comic: 'Asymptotic Notation's Scandinavian fanboys (part 2:language)']

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Fear my Scandinavian fanboys. Ja, men bare i Oslo!

I made another new one.

[Click to view comic: 'Asymptotic Notation's Scandinavian fanboys(part3:D+D/hiding)']

I welcome any constructive critique.

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Fear my Scandinavian fanboys. Ja, men bare i Oslo!

Yet another addition to the series:

[Click to view comic: 'Asymptotic Notation's Scandinavian fanboys (part 4: Varg)']

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Fear my Scandinavian fanboys. Ja, men bare i Oslo!

They're getting worse. Stop concentrating so much on character development and throw some friggin' jokes in there. You've got plenty of time to develop your characters "on the side," if you will. This is a comic strip, not a soap opera.

None of them were really heinously disgustingly up-chuckingly awful, though. Except #4. (If I read through all that BS, I want there to be a joke at the end of it!!)

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

Thank you for the advice. I will keep that in mind.

The next 2:

[Click to view comic: 'Asymptotic Notation's Scandinavian fanboys 5: broken record']
[Click to view comic: 'Asymptotic Notation's Scandinavian fanboys 6: prison']

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Fear my Scandinavian fanboys. Ja, men bare i Oslo!

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Thank you.

Could you critisize constructively, please, instead of just trying to belittle me?

Thank you.

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Fear my Scandinavian fanboys. Ja, men bare i Oslo!

I didn't find them that funny. I suppose it's because of the cultural barrier. Or maybe it's just because I hate Finns. Yeah, it's probably the hatred of Finns, actually.

but its Norwegians, mostly.. :\. The foreign language used in it is Norwegian. I don't speak Finnish.

I wonder why so many people dislike Scandinavia.

I don't actually live there myself.. either way. I know a lot of Scandinavians though..

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Fear my Scandinavian fanboys. Ja, men bare i Oslo!

Sorry, I just thought the picture was funny.

Finns, Norwegians...I don't really know the difference between them. All I know is that they induce an uncontrollable rage in me that causes me to rip my shirt off and howl.

They seem more like they're inside jokes. Try aiming for a more universal style, and many more people will appreciate the jokes.

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I think, therefore I make comments on a forum.

Sad.

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dcomposed:11-06-05: If I was a viking invading your village, you'd be the first to get raped.
Crabby: 10/5/06: i would love to feed you fresh fruit while bathing you.

I found them to be confusing. I'd say punch up your punchlines a bit, and when in doubt, simplify. That's what I say about everything though.

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Peeing sitting down is the gift you give yourself.

Thank all of you for the advice.

I will try harder to make my comics more understandable in the future. I'll have to think for quite a while about the next one.

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Fear my Scandinavian fanboys. Ja, men bare i Oslo!

here is a new one which I think I have made better:

[Click to view comic: 'Asymptotic Notation's Scandinavian fanboys 9: repairmen']

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Fear my Scandinavian fanboys. Ja, men bare i Oslo!

quote:

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Could you critisize constructively, please, instead of just trying to belittle me?

Thank you.

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Or perhaps I should say humour.

Yes, I too was sad when I ripped that shirt. It was a really nice shirt.

Your latest comic is better than your previous ones, I think. It's less funny, though, if you don't know the background of the Scandy fans. I'd suggest making it funnier stand-alone, but that's just my personal preference.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

Ok.. thank you very much Not_scyess for critiquing me a bit better than boinky did. I mean, I have no problem with humour but when used to belittle someone without having a point to make is just lame.. I am working on a newer comic.

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Fear my Scandinavian fanboys. Ja, men bare i Oslo!

[Click to view comic: 'Asymptotic Notation's Scandinavian fanboys 10: Ikea']

The newest installment. Based on an actual trip to Ikea.

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Fear my Scandinavian fanboys. Ja, men bare i Oslo!

Your comics do not adversely affect my cats, for which I am grateful.

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.