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guth
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its the end of the world
[Click to view comic: 'lucky survivior']

4-26-05 2:44pm (new)
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evil_d
Riding through your town with his head on fire

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It inspired me to make this, so thanks.

[Click to view comic: 'To save the species']

I don't find your comic all that funny. It just sets up a situation, which would be okay except that it's not, in itself, a funny situation. It's a situation that has the potential to be funny, but you don't do anything with it. Try inserting something unexpected into it. Have the guy say "So, who wants to play checkers?" Or make the guy (or the girls) gay. Or switch out one of the girls for a duck, then have the guy react to that somehow. Maybe the catgirl is supposed to elicit this effect in your strip, but if so, it doesn't really come across.

Good luck, and welcome to Stripcreator.

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The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!

4-26-05 3:41pm (new)
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guth
Stripcreator Newbie

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thanks for the advice i mayy make it a serise

4-26-05 3:59pm (new)
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attitudechicka
is never bored.

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In that case, check your spelling.

I also thought that it was a good set up for a series, but it's only 1% funny.

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Mediocrity at its most average.

4-26-05 4:15pm (new)
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guth
Stripcreator Newbie

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4-26-05 5:57pm (new)
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shank
What the bleep do we know?

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:|

4-26-05 7:31pm (new)
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not_Scyess
not laughing with you

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Except for your awful typing and spelling, I'd say it's 300% better. I like the comic.

You may think it's anal, but typing, grammar, and spelling really DO make a difference. Trying to parse your awful finger-diction breaks up the flow of the comic and can ruin the timing. That last comic could be much funnier yet if you'd just retype it.

Oh, and I thought evil_d's comic had funny potential, but the punchline was a little flat. Still better than your first, though.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

4-26-05 7:33pm (new)
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kaufman
Director of Cats

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And evil_d's inspiration inspired me to do this take. Maybe a little obvious, but ...

[Click to view comic: 'It's the End of the World as I Show It']

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4-26-05 8:23pm (new)
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flipynif1
Aparently a Creep

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HAHAHAHAHHA

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I dumb :D

4-28-05 8:52am (new)
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guth
Stripcreator Newbie

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[Click to view comic: 'lucy-fer']

This is my new comic, I have tryed my best with pelling and grammer hope you like it.

4-28-05 3:13pm (new)
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flipynif1
Aparently a Creep

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I liked the first one, leaving to the imagination can be good as long as there is some in that little head

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I dumb :D

4-28-05 3:33pm (new)
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