Well, if your purpose is to tell a true story, then, you've succeeded. However, if your purpose was to amuse the audience, you should condense the true story into a single comic at the expense of accuracy, since accuracy isn't really your goal. (If it is, then as i mentioned before, you succeeded.)
Tobor comics always suck, but the one you did didn't suck as much as some others do. Try some original ideas! I think you're getting the hang of this.
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