...what the hey?

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There's a second episode, but somehow it's not quite as good as it was in my head.

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Another one that was written as a sketch, but again, what the hey?
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Your comics have excellent set-ups. Really, they're some of the best I've seen... but the jokes just aren't funny enough, and leave the reader in a sucking void of bathos.

Work on those punchlines and you'll be an excellent stripper. Also remember that in general, the fewer words you use to get the point across, the funnier the strip is.

Soccer may be the "real" football, but it's also the "extremely boring" football.

I thought "Voices" was a good comic.

I don't want to get into an argument about football, so lets just say you're half right. "Soccer" does sometimes have long spells where nothing happens, although introducing beer to the situation makes them fly by. But there's nothing in any other sport that can compete with the beauty of seeing a thunderous looping volley from 50 yards.

And thanks for the compliment. "Voices" is the only one that came to me in comic strip form, so it didn't have the crappy long-windedness of the others.

Yes, I thought "Voices" was an especially original and funny set-up. But "My imaginary friend" was a pretty lame punchline.

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Another brilliant idea, and the punchline worked better this time. Although it migh've been more poignant to have butch saying nothing at the end... the title really explains it all.

Not great, and it's probably been done before, but I've said it before and I'll say it again: what the hey?

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Some funny stuff here - keep it up.

Yeah, Voices is the best of the lot. Keep it up, and welcome to Stripcreator.

I liked Killie best. Nice start.

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I don't want to get into an argument about football, so lets just say you're half right. "Soccer" does sometimes have long spells where nothing happens, although introducing beer to the situation makes them fly by. But there's nothing in any other sport that can compete with the beauty of seeing a thunderous looping volley from 50 yards.

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Why? Don't tell me you're one of these people who has to be 100% right, all of the time.

Cos if you are, then I'm very sorry, your majesty, for thinking I was allowed an opinion, it won't happen again.

See that it doesn't!

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This one's based on a true story...

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Please don't judge me on this, I was young foolish and in love. Okay fair enough, I'm still young foolish and in love, but at least now I know how much she hates me.

The Jesus comic was kind of lame, but "I just had to get this one off my chest" was fucking brilliant. I love it. A++.

It's good to know my misery has brought happiness to at least one person.

Your comics are getting more awesome.
Keep going and you might be better than Scyess...well up to her level. Am I gonna get hurt now?

-Chaplin-

It's funny you should say that, cos I've just hit a big creative block. I can't think of any new ideas. Any advice on how to get past this?

Say "Charlie Chaplin is God" 13 times and sacrifice 200 baby kittens...

And if it doesn't work you have a funny story to tell your co-workers...

-Chaplin-

It's not great but at least I've managed to come up with something today, plus there's the potential for further instalments.

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I don't really think there's potential for further installments, but feel free to prove me wrong. The comic itself is pretty good, though.

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And why is it I only have 2 stars, when no-one has made any negative comments about my comics?

Okay. Here's a negative comment: The comics aren't very funny. I wouldn't call them bad... in fact, the premise is pretty good. But the comics themselves lack a certain... I don't know... kick that comics should have.

I think you have much potential, though.

I like them, i found them a lot funnier than most other comics on here.

As someone of Irish descent, that last comic offends me. Just because we're a lousy bunch of drunks is no reason to make comics about it!

Wait, it is. Nevermind.

Cheers lima, and I would lie about saturdays if killie wanted me too. I just made him a killie fan cos he was an idiot.

And HCRoyall, I wish I was of Irish descent, then maybe my parents wouldn't be so pissed off about my alcohol problem.

So you've got blood in your alcohol-stream. Is that really such a problem? They need to lighten up.

My first comic in 2 days, I've spent way too much time reading George RR Martin...

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I like a lot of the strips, but your signature has me in stitches!

...of course, I have been told I'm mentally unbalanced, but I killed the voices that told me that, and the others have kept pretty quiet ever since!