Kill the Human Race? No, Just Fast Food Them to Death! by ladydorkness 8-28-05

Yeah, what d'ya want? Lemme seeee here... Would you like me to deep fry the buns and bag too? I would like three triple cheeseburgers, four large fries, and two diet Cokes. Oh hell. Can you really do that?

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BRUSH YOUR TEETH BEFORE YOU GO TO SCHOOL, OR ALL OF YOUR FRIENDS WILL SAY YOU SMELL LIKE STOOL!

I know it's not the best, so tell me how to improve! :)

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BRUSH YOUR TEETH BEFORE YOU GO TO SCHOOL, OR ALL OF YOUR FRIENDS WILL SAY YOU SMELL LIKE STOOL!

Daer ot tluciffid ti sekam hcihw ecneuqes fo tuo smees ti.

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Don't like it? Eat me.

haha, nice on chuckaduck...

Yes, try to sequence them in order. Good start though

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I dumb :D

True, one of the restrictions of stripcreator is that speech bubbles are stuck above the characters, so for it to read easily, you have to make sure the left-hand character speaks first in each panel.

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The tongue licking the ars of pretension.

Yeah I tried to find a way to make it look less confusing but the positions for the Gabe character were very limited, unfortunately. I think I might not use him anymore because of that. Oh well. Live and learn!

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BRUSH YOUR TEETH BEFORE YOU GO TO SCHOOL, OR ALL OF YOUR FRIENDS WILL SAY YOU SMELL LIKE STOOL!

He can face either direction

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I dumb :D

what everyone else said about sequence except with more flare and panache

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what if nigger meant kite

And more cowbell.

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It was such a waste of everyone’s time and money that even the Tokyo stadium’s rape robots apologized– something they were programmed specifically never to do.

Well, either way the Gabe character would still have to be on the left. It wouldn't make much sense if he was to the right of the other guy.

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BRUSH YOUR TEETH BEFORE YOU GO TO SCHOOL, OR ALL OF YOUR FRIENDS WILL SAY YOU SMELL LIKE STOOL!

And more cowbell.

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what if nigger meant kite

Here's how I would have done it:

Cut Out The Xtras (Revised ladydorkness comic) by attitudechicka 8-31-05

Welcome to Jack in the McBurger King, can I take your order? Lemme see... I'd like three triple cheeseburgers, four large fries, and two diet cokes. Would you like me to deep fry the buns and the bag as well? Can you really do that?

You don't really need some of the speach bubbles, like Gabe's thought of "Oh hell". Just because there's an opportunity, doesn't mean you have to take it.

It's funny, though, which is why I'm offering this revision to you.

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Mediocrity at its most average.

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Here's how I would have done it:

Cut Out The Xtras (Revised ladydorkness comic) by attitudechicka 8-31-05

Welcome to Jack in the McBurger King, can I take your order? Lemme see... I'd like three triple cheeseburgers, four large fries, and two diet cokes. Would you like me to deep fry the buns and the bag as well? Can you really do that?

You don't really need some of the speach bubbles, like Gabe's thought of "Oh hell". Just because there's an opportunity, doesn't mean you have to take it.

It's funny, though, which is why I'm offering this revision to you.

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I notice your a donor now. That's good ucz now, as you may know, you can go in and fix the damn thing.

Great comics, though!

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More lust than you can shake a stick at.

6 votes and 3 comics? WTF?

Seriously, I've done 64 strips and I only have 5 votes. And two of those were anonymous zeros within the first week...

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The tongue licking the ars of pretension.

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6 votes and 3 comics? WTF?

Seriously, I've done 64 strips and I only have 5 votes. And two of those were anonymous zeros within the first week...

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6 votes and 3 comics? WTF?

Seriously, I've done 64 strips and I only have 5 votes. And two of those were anonymous zeros within the first week...

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I've been here for months and I only have 24 votes. And ten are anonymous zeroes. It's not that important.

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6 votes and 3 comics? WTF?

Seriously, I've done 64 strips and I only have 5 votes. And two of those were anonymous zeros within the first week...

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I've been here for months and I only have 24 votes. And ten are anonymous zeroes. It's not that important.

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6 votes and 3 comics? WTF?

Seriously, I've done 64 strips and I only have 5 votes. And two of those were anonymous zeros within the first week...

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For the record, I rated her because the 3 comics she has are pretty good, not because I'm some kind of internet pervert. Just FYI.

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Think classy, you'll be classy.

w4nt t0 cyb3r?

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what if nigger meant kite

w4nt t0 cyb3r?

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It was such a waste of everyone’s time and money that even the Tokyo stadium’s rape robots apologized– something they were programmed specifically never to do.

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6 votes and 3 comics? WTF?

Seriously, I've done 64 strips and I only have 5 votes. And two of those were anonymous zeros within the first week...

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You are forgetting one thing, ladydorkness is female. Studies have shown that guys tend to rate females and their comics here at SC in hopes of obtaining cyber sex or nude pics. So unless you're a woman, an incredibly hot piece of man ass, or you can suck the chrome off a trailer hitch...I'm afraid that you're SOL, buddy.

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6 votes and 3 comics? WTF?

Seriously, I've done 64 strips and I only have 5 votes. And two of those were anonymous zeros within the first week...

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You are forgetting one thing, ladydorkness is female. Studies have shown that guys tend to rate females and their comics here at SC in hopes of obtaining cyber sex or nude pics. So unless you're a woman, an incredibly hot piece of man ass, or you can suck the chrome off a trailer hitch...I'm afraid that you're SOL, buddy.

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Sigh. Perhaps I should tell people I'm a girl...

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your insatiable!

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what if nigger meant kite