My first comic! Funny if I do say so myself.

The Main Course by HisJesterness 3-27-06

A chef is in the kitchen preparing a nice ham. Who turned the lights off?! All of a sudden the lights come on. You're gonna pay for that! A talking pig!!! Burned the main course again I see... ...

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"Humor is like a rubber sword - it lets you make a point without drawing blood." ~Mary Hirsch

Wha--?

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I-... I-....

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Destroying my reputation one post at a time.

Your dialogue is patronizing to the reader. For instance "look, it's a pig!" Yes...we know it's a pig...

Try something a little more subtle.

Subtle by ElTigreMask2K 4-03-06

A young gothic couple argues about groceries at dusk.... I am not want grocercies, it has become resting hour. Segei, for you now I am night owl and must stay on look out at night. The decide that they will cry over who gets to decide the fate of groceries.... If I cry more I choose stay home. I shall choose to shop if it is I that cry more. I cry more. Let us shop.

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Menthol?

Well, I thought it was good anyways ^_^

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"Cerebral ... does that mean your heart?"