So if ya wouldn't mind, go read my comics. Yeah, they're messed up, but oh well! Yep. Right on.

~alison

Ow, my head.

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Just because we have narration boxes doesn't mean we're forced to use them. It feels like you're talking down to the reader when you take it upon yourself to spell everything out in the narration boxes.

This being said, I have a sort of fondness for what happens in the 2nd comic... not much of a punchline but it speaks to me somehow. That first one just really left me flat, though.

Similar to my entry into the "appalling comics" contest...

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I like that strip, DexX. The Jesus line really makes it.

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Alcyonae, welcome to the Strip Creator. The others are right, you could do without all the narration in both of your comics. Aside from that... How to get Osama bin Laden starts out strong, but doesn't go anywhere. I enjoyed the "Oh my Allah" line, but I don't get the last panel at all.

I kind of like the bin Laden one, even though it doesn't make any sense. Or maybe because it doesn't.

As you've all probably figured out, I'm a messed up person. Lol. My comics make absolutely no sense. But I think I have to explain the bin Laden one. Okay. The first panel is bin Laden watchin' CNN (obviously), the second one is an American dude in a kangaroo suit coming to take bin Laden out. You see, he's so stupid he thinks it's a real kangaroo. The third panel is the American dude out of his kangaroo costume and the Boom! is... well, you guessed it. bin Laden. So there you go!

~alison

I understood that much, but it still doesn't make any sense.

Why would some regular American dud dress up like a kangaroo to get Bin Laden.

I think I found myself a partner for the crappy comics thread.

I think Alcyonae should go make a whole bunch of Aqua Tobor comics and the two of us can be comic stripping tag team partners.

Yeah, what Big Evil Dan said... Just because I know *what* happened doesn't mean I get it.

Hehe. I know I'm stupid. I don't really think that comic strip was supposed to make sense. But... Hey. Whatever floats yer boat. Too bad I don't know who Aqua Tobor is. Lol. But I'll be glad to join' ya in a tag team thing. After all, my comics are just plain fucked up.

~alison

If I didn't know crabby had some really good comics in his list, Aqua Tobor would make me remove him from my favorites.

Check out the crappy comics thread, I think Aqua Tobor starts at about page 7 or 8.

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That is a really good idea.

Well guys, I'm up for anything. Just let me know and I'll be glad to participate in stuff. But ya gotta remember - I just started this whole comic book stuff.

~alison

Gah... I'm a dumbass. How do I post my comics on the forum thingies?

~alison

{comic}#of the comic to be posted{/comic}

Use ] and [ instead of } and {

[comic]666[/comic] produces:

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Utterly, utterly sad... But I was bored. And it took up time. I hope this works. Here goes nothing! (Literally)

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~alison

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Well guys, I'm up for anything. Just let me know and I'll be glad to participate in stuff. But ya gotta remember - I just started this whole comic book stuff.

~alison

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ANYthing eh?

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Hmm... Well when you say "ANYthing" like THAT... I dunno. Lol. Especially with the pic of that dude. Kinda makes me a bit wary. Does anyone else look at him and think of a pervert? ^_^ That was a pointless smiley face thing. Oh well.

And hey... What was that "when a girl makes a comic strip" thing supposed to mean? Lol. I'm being utterly dense today.

~alison

P.S. I say utterly too much.

I think that's penisinfurs's attempt at stripcreator social commentary.

Ah... Right on. *scratches her head, still lost in confusion from only 10 hours of sleep last night*

~alison

"only get 10 hours of sleep"?
hmmmm...

God will (try to)... is a great one. It didn't need that narration in the 3rd panel, but it was still really cool.

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"only get 10 hours of sleep"?
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Who the hell would wanna have sex with me in the first place?

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Who the hell would wanna have sex with me in the first place?

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There's a lot of desperate people out there.

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Lol. I'm thinkin' that even a desperate person would go without sex before they did anything with me.

~alison

Just out of curiosity, how old are you?

This is cringeworthy.

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Just out of curiosity, how old are you?

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I figured as much from your saying "'Alisoooon!' Mom etc."

"Logical. Flawlessly Logical"- Mr. Spock

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I'm 15. Ya got a problem with that? *watches her ass get thrown out of the whole strip creator thing*

~alison

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I'm 15. Ya got a problem with that? *watches her ass get thrown out of the whole strip creator thing*

~alison

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Fortunately, I don't think Brad has ever kicked anyone off the stripcreator... though I could be wrong. Did that Amazed Porno Bunny guy get banned or did he just leave eventually?

Unless of course you mean the fact that your age might make you be taken less seriously... but really, who here takes anyone seriously anyways? (Unless it's over political/religious arguements or such...)

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This place *is* a waste of time whether you're liked by the regulars or not. If any of us were worried about wasting time, we would be out solving world problems as opposed to... umm... wasting time.

And what's wrong with stupid, skinny, blone teenagers?

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And what's wrong with stupid, skinny, blone teenagers?

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Okay.
I prefer brunettes and redheads anyway.

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I prefer brunettes and redheads anyway.

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Okay.
I prefer brunettes and redheads anyway.

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Good for you. Anyone else up for it?

~alison

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Just so you know, DragonXero *is* a stupid skinny blonde teenager.

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I guess I'm just wondering if anyone's gonna blow me off as some stupid, blonde, skinny teenager (which I'm NOT, by the way)...

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I guess I'm just wondering if anyone's gonna blow me off as some stupid, blonde, skinny teenager (which I'm NOT, by the way)...

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Nah, not me - I never thought you were skinny or blonde. *evil grin*

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*sigh*

Few things are as disappointing as an insult that goes over the intended target's head.

It was intended as a joke anyway, but still...

Haven't you figured out that I'm entirely too dense??? I'll probably understand the joke in a few days. Give it some time.

~alison

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I guess I'm just wondering if anyone's gonna blow me off as some stupid, blonde, skinny teenager (which I'm NOT, by the way)...

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Nah, not me - I never thought you were skinny or blonde. *evil grin*

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~alison