Heya, I'm not as Humourous as alot of you here, yet I try. Anyway, Here's a few of my Comics and I just wanted to see what Opinions you have on them. Please tell me what I did best, and what I needed to Improve.

[Click to view comic: 'Brother Mike']

[Click to view comic: 'Brother Mike']

[Click to view comic: 'Brother Mike']

[Click to view comic: 'Brother Mike']

[Click to view comic: 'Brother Mike']

You really shouldn't make every punchline the word retard, and you don't need to constantly use the names of the characters in the comic. In fact, you could easily not use them.

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the kid's getting old, the kid's getting old

Work on the subject-verb agreement and the funny.

I liked the "Duck" one and the reaper one.  But yes... a grammar and spelling check before creation would help improve understandability a lot.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

your punchlines either aren't funny at all or make no sense but not in a funny way. set ups are promising yet irritatingly unconsummated. fuck.

try drugs or drinking on the last panel...

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Kill Whitey.

Thanks Guys, you've really helped. I understand the points I need to understand and I know Im using the word Retard a little too much.