Heya, I'm not as Humourous as alot of you here, yet I try. Anyway, Here's a few of my Comics and I just wanted to see what Opinions you have on them. Please tell me what I did best, and what I needed to Improve.

Brother Mike by ComicCreator 5-05-07

Okay then Freddie, what did you learn from today's lesson. Duck! Close enough, I'll see you tomorrow then. Duck! Fucking Retard! Duck!

Brother Mike by ComicCreator 5-05-07

Hello? Brother Mike Speaking, who may I ask is speaking? Your Momma. Pardon me? I said your Momma! Who the Fuck is this? Take A Guess

Brother Mike by ComicCreator 5-05-07

You called Toby, been having Poltergiest problems again? No Mike, its these Damn Zombies. Zombies? What Zombies? I don't see No Zombies? You're telling me that those green hands reaching through the gaps in my windows and the groans coming from behind my door arent Zombies? There not Zombies. Jesus Toby, how many times do I have to tell you. Ghosts and Zombies aren't real. Now who's to blame for this Toby? Mexicans. Those Damn Mexicans!

Brother Mike by ComicCreator 5-05-07

Grim. My sworn enemy. The hood behind the rack, the evil next to the knievel... Yer, the point was made Mike. So Grim, what are you doing here in the real world. Im here to pick Lilly Flowers and make Daisy Chains to give to the old people I love to read too everyday! Really? What do you think Retard?

Brother Mike by ComicCreator 5-07-07

Abe, what brings you to the church this monday morning? I have a confession Brother, you wouldn't mind If I took a little of your time would you? No Problem Abe, go ahead. Its about your wife Brother. I dont have a wife. Exactly.

You really shouldn't make every punchline the word retard, and you don't need to constantly use the names of the characters in the comic. In fact, you could easily not use them.

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the kid's getting old, the kid's getting old

Work on the subject-verb agreement and the funny.

I liked the "Duck" one and the reaper one.  But yes... a grammar and spelling check before creation would help improve understandability a lot.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

your punchlines either aren't funny at all or make no sense but not in a funny way. set ups are promising yet irritatingly unconsummated. fuck.

try drugs or drinking on the last panel...

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Kill Whitey.

Thanks Guys, you've really helped. I understand the points I need to understand and I know Im using the word Retard a little too much.