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FrixFrax
June 6, 2007 2:40 PM

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not_Scyess
June 6, 2007 7:33 PM

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FrixFrax wrote:
TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That's a damn shame.

I mean, the premise isn't that bad, and the jokes are all right, but the type is awful, the use of Internet shorthand is annoying, and the concept of silly super heros officialy was finally beaten to death five years ago.

Don't worry, you don't suck.  But those comics kind of do.

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biped
June 6, 2007 10:08 PM

The name "Ku Klux Klown" made me LOL.

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FrixFrax
June 6, 2007 11:47 PM

quote:

not_Scyess wrote:

quote:

FrixFrax wrote:
TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That's a damn shame.

I mean, the premise isn't that bad, and the jokes are all right, but the type is awful, the use of Internet shorthand is annoying, and the concept of silly super heros officialy was finally beaten to death five years ago.

Don't worry, you don't suck.  But those comics kind of do.


Well my intention is not to have her speak like that forever.  Also you may be right about silly super heroes being done to death, but then this is just my perspective on them.  I reckon probably every joke has been done on stripcreator by now, so coming up with originality isn't going to be easy. However, thanks for your constructive criticism, glad I don't suck.  I shall finish this series, and go back to the drawing board.

Oh, and thanks biped.

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