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fraod
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I'm compiling the beginning of my Office series "No One Likes Dave" here. Ta-daa...some folks seem to enjoy this series. Maybe you like it to spite me. You just wanna like him so you make me a liar!

I give you Dave, like him or not:

[Click to view comic: 'No one likes Dave']

[Click to view comic: 'No One Likes Dave #2']

[Click to view comic: 'No Ones Like Dave #3']

[Click to view comic: 'No One Likes Dave #4']


 

 

 

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8-30-07 10:26pm (new)
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fraod
Stripcreator Newbie

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8-30-07 10:29pm (new)
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El_Phen
Does not play well with others.

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Me likey lots.

9-01-07 7:27am (new)
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crackpanther
Recreational User

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I think they're above average and a good start, but because your info says you're a 21 year old girl you should be prepared for people to tell you they're great comics.

9-01-07 8:35am (new)
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KingOfMusic89
Member - Tobor Fan Club

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crackpanther

Man those are great comics

9-01-07 8:45pm (new)
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Injokester
Definitely drunk

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crackpanther

Well I think they are great comics, but as a self taught cartoonist that can only draw backgrounds and men I'm probably doubly biased >_0

No, great doesn't capture it. Excellent? Wonderful? Masterly perhaps? Wow, where to start with how brilliant this girl is...

Firstly, what you've done within the limitations of stripcreator is incredible. They way you've written around the visuals is just amazing, at no point while reading did it feel like a character was used just because there was no better alternative (apart from the disproportionate Jesus, but that's forgivable >_0).

Even the lack of expressions and poses hasn't held you back- every strip just feels 'right'. You've breathed a real personality into these characters, and while it may sound like a line, you've done this so well it actually felt like I was seeing many of them for the first time (and I drew a bunch of them!).

Rarely have I found a comic strip (or any other medium for that matter!) that is so completely delightful, so well planned yet spontaneous, eloquent but never verbose, subtle yet lucid, shocking and never vulgar, that delivers the perfect blend of narrative, implication and utmost hilarity! Don't ever stop.

So onto the strips! I tried to cut this list down to just a few of my favourites to talk about. 9 was as close as I could get it.

Jesus Loves Poo is simply remarkable. It's also the first strip I've seen on stripcreator that could be split into 3 separate 1 panel comics and each would still be funny. And not only that, but they'd be funny in a completely unique and different way than the original gag. If you planned this then you're a genius. If not then your subconscious is a genius.

Fight or Flight- Oh, the Larsonesque beauty! This strip also stands out because you've used the narration box well, which is something of a rarity amongst new arrivals to SC.

It'sa Me!- Though it's a variation of an old joke, this is so, so perfectly understated. And you couldn't have picked better characters to parody!

Office Romance is one of the main reasons why I said it was like seeing these characters for the first time. I had something in mind when I drew them, but you've just changed the way I'll look at them from here on out. Any more or any less to this comic and it never would have been so.

Hospital Visit- While I think Squid can take a little credit for this one since he drew the doc, this whole strip comes together beautifully largely because the doc is still holding the bloody saw he has just used to butcher the husband! The transition from the syringe takes this strip so much further than a simple "and now I'm covered in blood" gag ever could. And this sort of thing occurs far too frequently in these comics for it to be written off as a coincidence.

I Vant To Be Alone is perfectly set up- skeletons, zombies, vampires, lawyers and then wham! punch line twist. Most of us have to work to get the pics here to tell a thousand words you know...

Smoke Break is definitely among my most favourite of your strips, I can't even envisage a better way to deploy those characters! 

Honeymoon in Mexico is just gorgeous! It may seem odd, but I've never even thought of that horse in anything but an anthropomorphic sense (largely due to Squid's Tardboy and Finkelman series), so being forced to see it as an actual mule dressed in costume was both a shocking wake-up and utterly delightful!

Office Equipment - This is very similar to what I had in mind when I drew that character, the idea was to have him beaten up by various things- co-workers, customers, even zombies. But a fax machine?!? BRILLIANT!

So to close off I'll take the opportunity to mention your artwork. In a word: Wow. The colouring and shading is simply amazing, and I just LOVE your style. You've got a bit of a head start on me, but if I'm even in your league in another decade I'll be happy ^_^

I haven't had a chance to pore over the work on your site in it's entirety, but it'll certainly give me something to enjoy in my next days off.

So welcome to Stripcreator, you've won a fan this day. Please please PLEASE! don't ever leave.

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9-02-07 1:32am (new)
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ftc
Stripcreator's Big Boss

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Fuck sakes Injok., you bought the ring yet?

 

Great comics. Make more and welcome to stripcreator.

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Poo perhaps?

9-02-07 8:57am (new)
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fraod
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El_Phen

Thank you! Then me likey you.

crackpanther

Thank you. I like being above average but below special. You can fly under the radar well like that.

crackpanther

But like most hot internet chicks, I'm hideously ugly and enormously fat in real life so it balances out.

Injokester

You know, when I asked you to talk me up on the forums, I kind of thought you'd go a bit more low-key...

Seriously though Injokester, you just broke my brain 6 ways 'til sunday. No one's ever said anything like that about me before, you saucy flirt. I'll try to be modest and hopefully not hurt your feelings by saying thank you very much, your kind and encouraging words have made my millenium, even though I can't comprehend anyone using them to describe me, my sense of humor or artwork and I will continue to think my comics are only mildly amusing and my art looks like a drunken monkey drew it. But again, thank you. I will try to keep it up despite the enormous amount of pressure I now feel (Thanks a lot for that by the way) and close by saying...somewhere, deep down there's a part of me that loves you. I'll never forget you or this magical moment we spent together.

...But then again, I can't shake the feeling you just said that stuff 'cause I'm 21 and a girl...

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9-02-07 7:44pm (new)
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fraod
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ftc

He did. Big ol' diamond ring. I told him I needed more time to consider.

Thanks. I will try to make more soon...except A: I'm horribly scared of this pressure to make a funny comic now and B: 31 comics in under a week broke my brain.

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9-02-07 7:53pm (new)
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adamddr
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You suck and I can't understand why people like your crap.

9-02-07 10:09pm (new)
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xxausrottenxx
Sock of the walk

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because, dumbass, girls don't poop. they secrete butterflies and fairy dust, everyone knows that.

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9-02-07 11:44pm (new)
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mandingo
weak stream

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it didn't elicit any outward chuckles of chucklehood, but it was definitely put together well. great use of that owl background in the third panel of #5 too. look forward to seeing more of your stuff

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9-03-07 1:51am (new)
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The_young_scot
Makes out like a Lesbian

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No One Likes Dave #2 made me laugh, good work

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9-03-07 2:25pm (new)
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Hatrix
All this and neurosis too!

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Oh no... I think I like Dave! :D

These made me laugh.

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“Life is intrinsically... boring and dangerous at the same time. At any given moment the floor may open up. Of course it almost never does; that's what makes it so boring.”--Ogdred Weary

9-04-07 6:40am (new)
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myles1890
Member - Tobor Fan Club

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I love it! Five stars. :D

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9-04-07 7:53am (new)
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Injokester
Definitely drunk

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Ha ha, you shouldn't feel any pressure on my account. Your comics prompted me to think, and opened an avenue to feelings I've long missed, and I just wanted to say thanks! 

I've suffered from writers block for the last year, and for many months have lacked even the inspiration to draw. For far too long I've carried the burdens and woes of working in a job I despise, and without the distraction of creativity it has been weighing upon me more and more every day. I've always used cartooning as an outlet for my frustrations, and when my inspiration sapped, my job had become almost unbearable. 

And then I read your comics! I don't know how, or why, but they gave my brain a kick start and opened a valve to my creativity- and things have snowballed from there. I've started writing and drawing again, smiling a lot more, and I haven't worried myself with work even once. 

So by about this time you're probably thinking I'm insane (and given my recent dramatic lifting of spirits my wife certainly agrees). And I probably am, so please don't feel pressured on my account. If it helps, just consider it as though you've just accidentally chipped away a little hole through which all the joy and inspiration I've been keeping bottled up for far too long has burst out (by way of what my friends like to call my "usual over-reaction" >_0).

Now, as for the 31 comic brain-snap- this happens to everyone. I think I had 32 comics when I hit my first hurdle, after that I struggled for the next 20 comics or so, but then it got a whole lot easier. If making comics is what you want to do, then just stop thinking about it- inspiration will come.

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9-04-07 11:03pm (new)
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AngryAmerican
Here at least 3 times a year

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"i hope something swoops down and kills me"

i love this line.

 i found the rest a bit pendantic, but well above the enormous amout of tripe this site generates.

have fun with it. no pressure.

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9-05-07 12:07am (new)
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fraod
Stripcreator Newbie

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Sorry I haven't responded! Been busy... ...okay, I haven't been busy, I've just been lazy.

RE: Injokester,

I'm really sorry I haven't replied to you 'til now! I just wanna say I'm totally awed that I could have effected you that much and it makes me really happy that I stumbled on stripcreator and decided to have fun fiddling with the setups. I never in a million years imagined anyone but me and my friends would get a giggle out of messing around in here and I'm just really, really happy to know I was able to help you in some way, somehow.

RE: everyone else! Just wanted to say thanks to everyone who had nice things to say, I appreciate it very much! Maybe someday soon I will eventually possibly sometime do a few more comics. but I'm super glad some of you really enjoyed the shtuff I already done did and let me know it. :) Thank you X Pi!

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9-30-07 11:10am (new)
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Wilbur
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lol. Keep up th good work.

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10-02-07 2:11pm (new)
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