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Shedda
Stripcreator Newbie

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Hey I Just started a new comic strip series called "The Office"

Here's a comic (it's the firstof 6 at the time)

 

[Click to view comic: 'Blasphemy'] 

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The Office rulez guys ^^...

1-20-08 9:15am (new)
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Shedda
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1-20-08 9:39am (new)
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AngryAmerican
Here at least 3 times a year

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you heve everything going for you except the funny. some of the punchlines just had me scratching my head thinking 'what the hell is he talking about'

keep tryin...

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1-20-08 1:21pm (new)
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AmishSunshine
Stripcreator Newbie

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Two things: One, your comics weren't really about the office. Some of them may have taken place there but they weren't really about working there. It lacked the office-like demeanor that something like "Office Spaced" (or whatever that movie is called, I can't remember) had.

Two: The punchline lacked... well... punch! It didn't really get the me thinking "Wow, that was funny and not expectable at all" or "That has definately NOT been done before"

Sorry for rambling. Anyway, as the dude above me said, keep trying. I see a real broad horizon for this type of comic, you just have to work at the humor a little more.

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Two Iraqis walked into a bar...

1-20-08 5:00pm (new)
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Shedda
Stripcreator Newbie

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hey guys

 

tanks for the feedback. :)  

it's only helpful when it's negative, isn't it? ^^  yeah i will keep tryin' thanks ;) 

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The Office rulez guys ^^...

1-21-08 12:00pm (new)
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dallas911
Stripcreator Newbie

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good try but need better punchlines

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This Comic was taped before a live studio audience

1-21-08 1:07pm (new)
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smamurai
Too orangey for crows

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I like them. Needs some salt and pepper tho. Yeah, I don't know what that means either.

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GOVT. Warning: Do not smoke around children they will badger you for fags.

1-21-08 2:26pm (new)
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