Hey I Just started a new comic strip series called "The Office"

Here's a comic (it's the firstof 6 at the time)

Blasphemy by Shedda 1-20-08

A Day in Office... See how i can change... Dude, that's blasphemy...

 

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The Office rulez guys ^^...

Cobain's Alive! by Shedda 1-20-08

Peter and Oliver outside their office... Dude, I don't wanna work all day... Yeah, it's kinda boring. See ya! I'm goin' home... Have a nice day, pal! WHAT?! I thought your were dead Kurt...

Drop The Thought by Shedda 1-20-08

Oliver at home... I'm gonna kick your @#?$ ass!... Hey Pete! Hey Oliver! wtf?! Stop thinking, idiot!

Working... What Else? by Shedda 1-20-08

Another Day in Office... Good morning, Oliver! Mornin'.....uhm.. Boss... So.. what are your plans for today? Uhm... workin'? THAT'S IT! Shut the @#?$ up...

Explosive by Shedda 1-20-08

In the Basement of the Office... Hey Oliver! What are YOU doin' here? Same question to you... Explodin' and stuff... What the hell?! Now I get it!

You're Not Workin' All The Time by Shedda 1-20-08

A Day in the Office... Dude, the meeting hasn't started yet... Yah, I'm kinda disappointed. I'm goin' home! Again?... ...And today is sunday the 20th of January PETER! TODAY IS SUNDAY!!

 

These are the 5 recent comics... comments pls  

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The Office rulez guys ^^...

you heve everything going for you except the funny. some of the punchlines just had me scratching my head thinking 'what the hell is he talking about'

keep tryin...

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Kill Whitey.

Two things: One, your comics weren't really about the office. Some of them may have taken place there but they weren't really about working there. It lacked the office-like demeanor that something like "Office Spaced" (or whatever that movie is called, I can't remember) had.

Two: The punchline lacked... well... punch! It didn't really get the me thinking "Wow, that was funny and not expectable at all" or "That has definately NOT been done before"

Sorry for rambling. Anyway, as the dude above me said, keep trying. I see a real broad horizon for this type of comic, you just have to work at the humor a little more.

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Two Iraqis walked into a bar...

hey guys

tanks for the feedback. :)  

it's only helpful when it's negative, isn't it? ^^  yeah i will keep tryin' thanks ;) 

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The Office rulez guys ^^...

good try but need better punchlines

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This Comic was taped before a live studio audience

I like them. Needs some salt and pepper tho. Yeah, I don't know what that means either.

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GOVT. Warning: Do not smoke around children they will badger you for fags.