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a4heo
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[Click to view comic: 'Reasons why unmarried people don't need cars']

well what do you think? this is an obvious situation... in other words 'nuff said. pedofiles are for the needy (depraved hint hint) also best excuses for pants.

5-08-08 5:18pm (new)
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a4heo
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crap i think messed up in the whole thing i'm not sure

5-08-08 6:19pm (new)
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crowspeaker
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Is that not what you wanted? Go ahead and play around with it.

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5-08-08 6:21pm (new)
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a4heo
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naw its what i wanted but i'm not sure if it's what others would like.

5-08-08 6:32pm (new)
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crowspeaker
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Well, maybe it needs a little tweaking. You squeezed an awful lot into one panel.

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5-08-08 7:58pm (new)
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pnmclaug
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I'm torn here. I think it's funny that he says it all in one panel, because it makes it sound rushed and nervous, but on the other hand you could pace it and have better comedic timing with multiple panels. I was fond of it though. Make some more.

5-09-08 2:25am (new)
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Zaster
Wait for it...

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Anyone unmarried and over 38 is a pedophile? Who knew?

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5-09-08 6:20am (new)
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AngryAmerican
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that means i have less than a year to get a wife or start banging kids?

damn. i was hoping to make it to 40....

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5-09-08 1:28pm (new)
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a4heo
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lol thats just the way i look at it because of tha news

people like that scare me.

5-09-08 1:33pm (new)
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a4heo
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here's another one i made

[Click to view comic: 'Eyore's gone pink!']

I like this one better what do you think?

5-09-08 1:36pm (new)
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a4heo
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here's another one after that

[Click to view comic: 'Another Tobor cornhole']

i've begun to catch on.

5-09-08 4:12pm (new)
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a4heo
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i think i got the whole drug thing down...

[Click to view comic: 'What to not do to a cop']

5-10-08 12:22am (new)
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AngryAmerican
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those musta been some fairly mild drugs...

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Kill Whitey.

5-10-08 1:23am (new)
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a4heo
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i think they were.

5-10-08 10:22am (new)
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a4heo
Stripcreator Newbie

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hopefully this is the last time i post.

[Click to view comic: 'What Not To Do To Cops 2']

thanks for your feedback guys.

5-10-08 6:25pm (new)
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pnmclaug
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none of your new comics have any sort of punchline, or joke even. "haha drugs are zany" doesn't count.

 not trying to be mean, just try harder

ps you can't smoke lsd, that's just silly 

5-16-08 1:51am (new)
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