Regarding "SNL Sucks,"
his name is spelled "Will Ferrell." You should be consistent
about ending your sentences in your dialogue with punctuation.
The names of the television shows should have double quotes
around them. It would be capitalized as "Thank God" instead
of the generic "god" as you have it. Place a comma right before
"you moron," because that entity is being addressed.
I like it overall; it's visually interesting to me, it is relevant to me, and I feel I understand about 85% - 90% of its content.
