Please check out my first comic and tell me if it sucked.

http://www.stripcreator.com/comics/fleury29 

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Fleury 19+10

i don't understand the pink sweater one at all, and could only get through one of the pot smoking squirrel ones.

 swing and a miss, but keep trying...

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Kill Whitey.

SNL Sucks by fleury29 5-29-08

Ladies and gentlemen, I'd like to address an important topic. It's called Saturday Night Live. Remember when Will Ferrel was in it and it was actually funny. Hey, here's a clip now I hope the audience comes back. They won't you moron, we suck. Thank god we do so that we can say and do what ever we want! See what I mean? It sucks. Try watching The Late show with Dave Letterman. What are you talking about? (Audience above)

 

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Fleury 19+10

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Fleury 19+10

Regarding "SNL Sucks,"

his name is spelled "Will Ferrell."  You should be consistent

about ending your sentences in your dialogue with punctuation.

The names of the television shows should have double quotes

around them.  It would be capitalized as "Thank God" instead

of the generic "god" as you have it.  Place a comma right before

"you moron," because that entity is being addressed. 

I like it overall; it's visually interesting to me, it is relevant to me, and I feel I understand about 85% - 90% of its content.