This is my first comic. I apreciate feedback and constructive critisism, but please dont flame the hell outta me.

/comics/taniman/445989/

You know, Brad and DexX do kind of look like the Mac and PC guys.

The comic is okay.  The idea is funny, but the execution is a little flat.  The dialogue strikes me as unrealistic, and you could do more with the last panel: okay, he's in hell, but what if he cracked a joke about being in hell, or what if the demon came up with some kind of ironic torture for him?

Not a bad start, though; welcome aboard, and keep at it. 

I think it's Pretty good for a first. You're first is way better then my first. Just keep at it and you'll get a laughing streak in no time. I started off really bad. You seem to be a bit better with your first comic. This was my first laugh I got and I didn't understand why it was so funny:

/comics/Beeko180/434783/

And this is me almost 700 comics later:

/comics/Beeko180/445928/

Keep at it and you'll get a bunch of hits sooner or later.   :)

I DON'T GET THE FIRST ONE. WHAT IS IT?!?!?!

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DSP97

You got the second one??

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Beeko180 wrote:

/comics/Beeko180/434783/

/comics/Beeko180/445928/

Keep at it and you'll get a bunch of hits sooner or later.   :)

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...were you implying that that second comic was somehow less shitty than the first one?

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not_Scyess wrote:

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Beeko180 wrote:

/comics/Beeko180/434783/

/comics/Beeko180/445928/

Keep at it and you'll get a bunch of hits sooner or later.   :)

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...were you implying that that second comic was somehow less shitty than the first one?

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I wasn't implying that. I was implying that I originally didn't mean it to be funny. That's all.