This is my first comic. I apreciate feedback and constructive critisism, but please dont flame the hell outta me.

Everyone Hates Linux by taniman 10-28-08

Hi, I'm A Mac And I'm A PC "Hey You Guys Over There!!" It's Linux again.... I thought we got rid of him last time.... Hmmfff.... Welcome to Hell

You know, Brad and DexX do kind of look like the Mac and PC guys.

The comic is okay.  The idea is funny, but the execution is a little flat.  The dialogue strikes me as unrealistic, and you could do more with the last panel: okay, he's in hell, but what if he cracked a joke about being in hell, or what if the demon came up with some kind of ironic torture for him?

Not a bad start, though; welcome aboard, and keep at it. 

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The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!

I think it's Pretty good for a first. You're first is way better then my first. Just keep at it and you'll get a laughing streak in no time. I started off really bad. You seem to be a bit better with your first comic. This was my first laugh I got and I didn't understand why it was so funny:

Get-In-A-Bin Day by Beeko180 6-14-08

HI  Um........................................ Hi. What are you doing in a bin? It's Get-In-A-Bin Day Seems reasonable. I'll join in!!!!! The End By James. Wanna be Fwends ?????????????????? Um................Ok

And this is me almost 700 comics later:

Generations~ Inspired by Chaodwarrior by Beeko180 10-28-08

The 1st generation......... Jesus why did they nail you to a cross? What do you think?! The 2nd generation........ Science guy why did they tie you up, cement you into the form of a stick and dump you in the ocean? What do you think?! The weird generation??? Al Gore Why did they torment you, bash your skull in, throw irons at you're face, burn you and use you're ashes to mutate you into an alienated freak? I stole my mum's Visa! What do you think?!

Keep at it and you'll get a bunch of hits sooner or later.   :)

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You have my most solemn and honourbound of vows that clicking this link will not direct you to a youtube video of a rick roll

I DON'T GET THE FIRST ONE. WHAT IS IT?!?!?!

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DSP97

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www.100waystokillastickman.com ~ Blood & gore is the name of the game! (Coming soon)

You got the second one??

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You can take the heart out of the hooker but you can't take the hooker out of the heart. -- Frankenhooker

Beeko180

...were you implying that that second comic was somehow less shitty than the first one?

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

not_Scyess

...were you implying that that second comic was somehow less shitty than the first one?

I wasn't implying that. I was implying that I originally didn't mean it to be funny. That's all.

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You have my most solemn and honourbound of vows that clicking this link will not direct you to a youtube video of a rick roll