Look's a my first comics, comments please :)

 

 

 

Metin 2 cheater (Version English) by baton12321 3-18-09

Somewhere in Metin 2 Do not go to me today the acquisition of experience :( I use cheat. &%$^^%##%^# cheater! How did you!? And #%$!

          

In the office... by baton12321 3-18-09

In the office of the Director... Ha! See how beautiful I wrote this script? So much work but pay it! Hm ... Tell him or not? What do not you say? Ehhh ... For the boss ... I did today format by accident, backup all the boot's, and removed the contents of SP3 .... This is all because of this stupid secretary ... WHAAAAAAT?!!!! That I can now go one better ...

Road by baton12321 3-19-09

Not so, my son. Oh! Big Devil! And so? Sorry. I did not know at all that you need to bite someone What a f*** miracle you want to bite someone on the empty road?

 

 

New! :)

And again... :)

 

Sale. by baton12321 3-19-09

Pursuit police for a serial killer ... Do not be afraid. I am not dangerous Say something !!!!! Stick you in the eye, see what sale!   ?

 

Inveterate player GTA IV by baton12321 3-19-09

Destroy all !! Long live the Great Buddha! I burn all !!! Asta la vista baby !

 

 

My Best :D

:)

 

Conversation by baton12321 3-19-09

Unless you have boobs bigger than your brain! After all I have small breasts No well, not quite that stupid to have a small breast ...

 

 

I count on the comments!

 

In the chat...

Night Chat I am sexy 20. I have blonde hair And my name is Alina. I am sexy 22. My name is Tom.

by baton12321, 3-19-09

 

 

Comments!

That last one was the best.

I had difficulty understanding the dialogue in most of these.  If English isn't your native language, consider writing in your native language.

Even when I did understand, I often didn't find them humorous.  Remember, just because something would be funny if it happened in real life doesn't mean that it will be funny in a comic.  Look at other comics (or comedians, movies, whatever) that you find funny, and think about what makes them work.  Pay attention to the elements of a joke -- the set-up and the punchline.  Your last comic is funny because something is happening that isn't what we'd expect.  Try to work with that: use the first two panels to make us expect something, then, in the last panel, deliver a punchline that shatters that expectation.  Here's a great example:

So This is the Apocalypse by allenhenderson 2-22-01

Well I guess this giant bug is going to eat me That seems the only logical outcome of this cartoon Happy Birthday!

 

Keep working on it.  Good luck.  Welcome to stripcreator. 

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The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!

Thanks for the words of understanding. I come from Poland and I do not know how to build some opinion. What you say certainly motivate me. :) PS. Great comic :D

Has followed the instructions evil_d came to me and something like this:

 

Father Rydzyk. (Polish boss sisters mochers :D) by baton12321 3-19-09

In the toilet... Hi Mark,what are you reading? Hi,Derek.About minor children practicing sex And what do you think about of them? I think that they need a glass of water Before or after? Instead!!!

 

 

:)  What do you think?

I like that comic quite a lot, actually.  Good job!

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The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!

I found most of these incomprehensible.

That means I can't understand what the hell is going on.

 

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Kill Whitey.

Girlfriend by baton12321 3-21-09

Hey Hi... I must confess to you... Say... I was asleep with your girlfriend ... And how was that?

 

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