Twittermethis.....Twittermethat.... by Charliaj 6-08-09

Chili's Restaurant Damn I hate this B*t**....Ordering like I have a bottomless tab!! & I hope she order the guilt-less chicken...lazy ass Lame ass mutha f@*%*.... Cheap ass....what do U work 4? Text messaging at the table.......boodaboo...boodaboo...beep..beep @Sasha Fierce- Girl tell me why he got me ordering house wine @Sasha Fierce - Girl where U eating? @Sasha Fierce- Girl order enough for me too... @Longhairdontcare - Girl are u seeerious? U better elimadate @Longhairdontcare- Oh girl I'm at a steakhouse... @Longhairdontcare- Girl I got U!! I ain't paying! She still texting at the table....boodaboo..beep ..hits up Tyrone & who she texting? I hope they text her a coupon code....sh*% @Sasha Fierce- Tyrone u taking me out tomorrow? @NFLrookie22- U know I got u... .....NFLrookie22 thinking: "Damn....steaks tonite & 2morrow. ..maybe chili's tomorrow"

There's humor here, but it's hard to find amidst all the punctuation marks.  Try telling a simpler story.

Welcome to Stripcreator. 

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The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!

You right.  I couldnt format it like i wanted to.  The girl is a groupy and her friend is too.  She's not getting what she wants from the guy she's on a date with, so she hits up an NFL guy she's dating.   Little does she know that her friend - @longhairdontcare is on a date with him (at a steakhouse)

If you have to explain the comic when you're done, you've failed.

Like evil_d says, go simpler.  The stuff you can do with Stripcreator is limited; if you try to do too much no one will get the joke but you.

Still, the concept of the comic isn't bad.  Keep trying!

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

It was over for me when I saw the @ symbol.

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