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There's humor here, but it's hard to find amidst all the punctuation marks.  Try telling a simpler story.

Welcome to Stripcreator. 

You right.  I couldnt format it like i wanted to.  The girl is a groupy and her friend is too.  She's not getting what she wants from the guy she's on a date with, so she hits up an NFL guy she's dating.   Little does she know that her friend - @longhairdontcare is on a date with him (at a steakhouse)

If you have to explain the comic when you're done, you've failed.

Like evil_d says, go simpler.  The stuff you can do with Stripcreator is limited; if you try to do too much no one will get the joke but you.

Still, the concept of the comic isn't bad.  Keep trying!

It was over for me when I saw the @ symbol.