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DIN0
Junior Comic Technician

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FREE THEM FROM YOUR FAIL.

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fail, fail again, fail better.

1-19-10 8:27pm (new)
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DIN0
Junior Comic Technician

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Can some donerz read and rate my comizx please, its not alot, any feedback of any kind is appreciated.

Lemme know which series has the most potential. IF ANY.

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fail, fail again, fail better.

1-19-10 8:29pm (new)
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DIN0
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1-19-10 8:38pm (new)
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choadwarrior
Crash Magnet

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The random punchlines in the third panels aren't working.  You need to set up the punchlines better in the first two.  For what it's worth, I liked these two:

[Click to view comic: 'Return of The Jesus: 1, 2, 3 Times My Saviour']

[Click to view comic: 'Return of The Jesus: Do You Feel Lucky?']

The rest I read are just meh.  Try better set ups like those and you'll do fine. 

1-19-10 8:43pm (new)
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Lord_Vodek
Forum Whore

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i'm not a donor but i agree with and look up to chaod you need better set ups i have the opposite problem apperantly i have great set ups but my punchlines fail to deliver lol keep trying and trying is my only advice work on your set ups

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Resident Masochist & Adrenaline Junkie -I'm probably not god but you should worship me just in case-

1-21-10 5:56pm (new)
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AngryAmerican
Here at least 3 times a year

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U asked 4 ratingz, U got em.

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Kill Whitey.

1-22-10 3:15pm (new)
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