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DIN0
Junior Comic Technician

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FREE THEM FROM YOUR FAIL.

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fail, fail again, fail better.

1-19-10 8:27pm (new)
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DIN0
Junior Comic Technician

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Can some donerz read and rate my comizx please, its not alot, any feedback of any kind is appreciated.

Lemme know which series has the most potential. IF ANY.

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fail, fail again, fail better.

1-19-10 8:29pm (new)
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DIN0
Junior Comic Technician

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Fun With Animals (For Kids)

Fun With Animals (For Kids): Episode #69 by DIN0
11-18-08
So remember kids, if you don't like an animal because it's smaller than you and really annoying, you can just shoot them in the face.
Ye.. Wait, what?
Join us tomorrow when we learn how to make animals sit, stay and beg.

EmoKid

EmoKid: Big Decisions by DIN0
1-19-10
Sometimes when I'm faced with decisions like these, it feels like all eyes are on me.
In moments like these its best to just take your time and eventually make the right desicion, and say exactly the right thing...
Are all emoz anorexic?

Return of the Jesus

Return of The Jesus: First Contact by DIN0
4-28-08
Hey it's me Jesus, I came back. Are you a fisherman?
D only fishin i be doing is for booty!
Close enough. You, Harvey The Pirate, are now my first disciple.
Can I still download porn?

Office Spaced

Office Spaced: Who's the boss? by DIN0
4-04-08
A Jedi I am.
You're the Jedi they sent?
WTF!? He's serious!
OK. We need you to use the force to create coffee.
You don't want coffee, you want poop constantly.
I think I just shit my pants.

Noob Ninja

Noob Ninja: In My Mind by DIN0
4-15-08
What happened? Where am I?
YOU ARE IN THE DEPTHS OF YOUR MIND: BEHOLD I AM YOUR INNER DEMON- THE EMBODIMENT OF ALL THAT YOU FEAR! FACE ME NOOB - IF YOU DARE!!
WTF!?!
ARGH!! NOOOOOoooooooo!!!
Boo!

 

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fail, fail again, fail better.

1-19-10 8:38pm (new)
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choadwarrior
Crash Magnet

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The random punchlines in the third panels aren't working.  You need to set up the punchlines better in the first two.  For what it's worth, I liked these two:

Return of The Jesus: 1, 2, 3 Times My Saviour by DIN0
4-28-08
Hey Tommy The Thief, you will steal no longer.
WTF?
You are now my 3rd disciple. End your crimes and follow me.
WHY SHOULD I?
Free fishsticks and wine.
sweet.

Return of The Jesus: Do You Feel Lucky? by DIN0
4-30-08
Can I be the disciple that kills you Jesus? Pleaseeeee
Yes, Judass you can be my 8th desciple as of this moment.
Well.. make a move, punk.

The rest I read are just meh.  Try better set ups like those and you'll do fine. 

1-19-10 8:43pm (new)
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Lord_Vodek
Forum Whore

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i'm not a donor but i agree with and look up to chaod you need better set ups i have the opposite problem apperantly i have great set ups but my punchlines fail to deliver lol keep trying and trying is my only advice work on your set ups

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Resident Masochist & Adrenaline Junkie -I'm probably not god but you should worship me just in case-

1-21-10 5:56pm (new)
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AngryAmerican
Here at least 3 times a year

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U asked 4 ratingz, U got em.

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Kill Whitey.

1-22-10 3:15pm (new)
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