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RogueLeader
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The lost art of manners I to III.

Sammy I to IV.

The Lost Art of Manners. by RogueLeader
5-09-03
The scene: a typical ney Jersey restaurant.
Good day, sir.
Show me to my table at once.
Looks like troubles a brewin.
No.
No? Ill show you no...
The End.
What the bloody hell...
You've just lost yourself a customer pal.

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I did this by severing my real arms and replacing them with super-human cyborg arms.

5-13-03 9:02am (new)
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umfumdisi
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Just being "weird" doesn't equal being "funny."

You seem to have potential, though.

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Chicken Feather Bed Bugs Bunny Hop Sing Out Side Street Walker Texas Ranger Cookie Dough Boy Wonder Years

5-13-03 9:27am (new)
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Devin
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I was tricked! I was expecting Pretty Sammy comics!

But anyway, I think fuzzyman said it best in the third panel of that comic:

umf's already mentioned how the whole Pepsi-Twist bit isn't working. I would also like to add that the narration is unnecessary. This isn't a writing contest-- use ONLY as many words as you need to get the point across.

I only looked at the one comic that you showed, so maybe you don't have as much excess narration as I think.

5-13-03 11:32am (new)
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