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The first and, sadly, not the last.

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And so I aborted my fetus.

The Phone Call... PART ONE. by Dracon_Shadow 7-12-03

RING! RING! RING! Who could be calling me now? RING! RING! RING! RING! Screw it, I have reaping to do. RING! RING! GOD DAMN YOU REAPER! RING! RING! Well, it got my attention.

I like the second panel in this one. He's got reaping to do. Gone reapin'. Maybe I can squeeze in a little more reaping before dinner. Funny.

Names by Dracon_Shadow 7-13-03

I have trouble naming multiple characters. Usually because the names I use are just variations on the words "shadow" and "walker" And you, I shall name Reklaw. This limits my ideas, though. Well, I've used Zodahs and Reklaw already. So I give up and just use a name backwards. I christen thee Olbaid!

Could have been better. You gave away the joke too early. Don't mention a backwards name until the last panel and don't tell us you're doing it. When we figure it out ourselves, we'll like it better.

I don't know, either. by Dracon_Shadow 7-13-03

Dr. Jekyll Mr. Hyde Dr. Jekyll/Mr. Hyde's mother.

Funny. Can't really put my finger on why. Just kind of absurd. Unexpected.

I wanted a one panel comic by Dracon_Shadow 7-13-03

Butch gets lucky, Maura gets a new orifice cut into her. It all works out in the end. Oh God, take me now!

Maybe my favorite so far. It leaves a lot to the imagination, but we can fill it in easily. And because of the way the panel is constructed, we read the end of the story before the beginning. So partly it's funny that such a simplistic beginning is what leads to that end. As a side note, you should use this technique more often when you only want a one-panel comic, instead of stuffing filler in the extra panels, which I find both distracting and uninteresting. Well, except in cases like this, where it's part of the joke. It works well there.

The hell? by Dracon_Shadow 7-15-03

Dear Sweety Pumpkin, how about we rub our disposable lighters together when I get home? XOXO Sticky. ... The hell?

Probably the best of that series. In some of them (example), the innuendo is too obvious to be funny. I like the above-posted because it makes us guess. The hell, indeed?

I read all your comics so far, and those were my favorites. Many of the rest felt flat, lost momentum too early. But keep practicing, and read strips by other people that make you laugh. You'll improve.

Welcome to Stripcreator.

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The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!

I like them, for the most part. And really I can't think of anything more to add that wasn't said already.

I do hate life, though, so I liked this one:

Don't Read Unless You Hate Life by Dracon_Shadow 7-14-03

I like the fish! As do I! Your fish! What are you talking about? I want to go downtown. Don't you live downtown? Oh, if only...

Asian girls never get old.