It's my first, so if it royally sucks, just tell me, and I'll do my best to think up better jokes.

http://www.stripcreator.com/view.php?ID=160810&author=chadman615

I think it almost works - I'm going to guess, though, and assume one of the missing words might have been "replica" - I don't think that's quite clear enough from the dialogue (and sorry if I'm assuming incorrectly). "One or two words on the order form" is too vague - I haven't seen an order form that works like that. I think the gap that you're trying to get the audience to bridge has to be a bit smaller - I unintentionally make strips that probably do the same thing for lots of people that this one did for me. It's a funny idea, though, so I'd like to read more from you.

Oh - I just read "User-Friendly" and think it's great.

I see your point about the first one - I know how to fix it, too, so it's too bad stripcreator won't let me edit my comics. Oh, well. And thanks for the compliment on my second one.

I liked both of them.

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