Yeah, my comic.

Comic = here.

they suck go eat a tree hippie

---
cunt of the day: all you dumb niggers

Wow, aren't you nice. I hate to say this, but I hate people like you, who flame, and never give feedback otherwise. Have a nice day, and I hope you choke on one of those cocks you're sucking.

The least you could do is use proper grammar, oh ye of little brain.

at least u could shutup and stop harrassing me :-\

---
cunt of the day: all you dumb niggers

Each comic gets a little better. Keep it up. Onward and upward.

---
Peeing sitting down is the gift you give yourself.

shut the hell up

---
cunt of the day: all you dumb niggers

I bet you were a lonely little child, weren't you? Did you have daddy issues?

Gross. Don't talk to me. You're getting your suck all over my school clothes.

---
Peeing sitting down is the gift you give yourself.

jee you guys really know how to make a gal feel special :-)

---
cunt of the day: all you dumb niggers

And you don't. That's why you're alone.

yeah, what ar you zerosign-alone-?

why dont yuo go have sex right now. don't froget to write dwon *exactly* waht goes son so we believe you had sex otherwies the internet will never forgive you

ohj man, good one dood, he msut be a lonely virgin! :rollin ;x :x

---
I STILL DON'T NEED THIS PLACE TO DO CMOICS BRAD, YOU FUCKING GOLLIWOG PICANINNY FUCKER :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

quote:

---

yeah, what ar you zerosign-alone-?

why dont yuo go have sex right now. don't froget to write dwon *exactly* waht goes son so we believe you had sex otherwies the internet will never forgive you

ohj man, good one dood, he msut be a lonely virgin! :rollin ;x :x

---

I hope you're on the pill.

---
Poop.

quote:

---

Yeah, my comic.

Comic = here.

---

I love this guy.

Which guy do you love, boinky?

quote:

---

quote:

---

Yeah, my comic.

Comic = here.

---

I shall actually comment on the content of the comics, and not make a snotty-ass wisecrack that will just annoy everyone:

I think Your comics are fairly amusing, TheCheese! Not the best, but definitely worth a look.

Okay, lets get back to mindlessly bashing eachother, now! WoooHooo!

---

I beg your pardon, but my comics do have punch lines, they are just subtle. Just wanted to clear that up.

I like your comics, TheCheese, they get better as you continue to make them, I look forward to reading more.

---
"In a thousand years there will be no men and women just wankers and that's fine by me."

Also, this is just my opinion, the other stripcreators may disagree, but like, in this comic:

MTV Music Generator by TheCheese 7-22-03

Dude, MTV Music Generator is cool! I just made two songs! You know, I've had that forever, and I've only made 3 songs. Pretty sad, huh? ... ... Yes, yes it is. I know.

I think the "..." in the second panel actually distracts from the comic, I think the ol'garfield treatment of having panels where neither character says anything can be great for a delayed joke.

By the way

I'm not saying all comics need an obvious knock knock joke punchline, for example, here is a comic of mine with the last statement being "good point":

hoo-mans by Kaddar 10-26-02

Foolish hoo-man food. Foolish robot's inability to repair one's damaged body parts. Good point.

But I'm just trying to help you improve.

But what do I know, someone posted in my comments for my account: "Possibly only has one eye." so maybe I'm not just seeing things straight. Or maybe I'm just as awsome as a pirate. I'm not exactly sure what it means.

I would have taken those "..." statements out, but unfortunately, StripCreator doesn't let you change current comics, or even delete comics... so I can't... stupid people should make that an option... *shakes fist*

Pirates = cool, so I'd take that as a compliment if I were you Kaddar. :)

Hey Cheese,
Not to plug for the site or anything, but...
Donators can delete comics. That's why I did it, because some of my comics felt like naked baby pictures, they sucked so bad.

I think Kaddar brings up some good points. A good no text panel has a lot of comic value. You can almost hear the eyelids flicker. Subtly is good and funny at times, but...punchlines and bookends like "yeah" or "?" or "OK" are hit and miss and require a good set up to make them work. When most comics end that way, usually the punch line is the middle panel and the last panel is just something the stripper had left over and just want to fill it with something. Also, comics, as with people, seem to be funnier when the characters are firmly commited to something. Complacent people make for complacent comics. Kaddar's examples of variations on a theme were good versions of this. He raised the stakes of the characters and punched up the jokey part. That's not to say you have to spell everything out, just raise the stakes.

These are by no means die hard rules, but they're things I've noticed about the comics that make me laugh.

Enough serious talk. Tallywacker. Ah, that's better.

---
Peeing sitting down is the gift you give yourself.

I'm not sure Kaddar's versions were any funnier than the originals.