Here is my first attempt at a comic...please let me know what you think. Thank you.

Here We Go Again by AccentuateNegative 9-13-03

Hey, we wanna take you out for your birthday. Anywhere you want, just name the place. You guys are great! How about the Prado at Balboa Park? I don't want to go there. Anywhere else. Just name the place.

A semi-good first try, at least you didn't use a lot of narration. Don't fall into that trap! Keep on stripping and good luck! =D

I thought it was better than semi-good.

Keep it up.

Agreed. I found the 'I don't want to go there' line especially funny. Continue stripping!

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Carry the battle to them. Don't let them bring it to you. Put them on the defensive. And don't ever apologize for anything. - Harry S Truman, 33rd president of US (1884 - 1972)

Thanks. Here is another. Don't worry, I won't post them all, but until I have more ideas, these will have to do for now.

Subsidies by AccentuateNegative 9-13-03

Hey, thanks for loaning us money for rent this month--things are really tight. Yeah, don't worry, we'll pay you back before the end of the month. No problem. You guys have any plans later? I have to go home and bid on some crap on Ebay. I have to go and buy some pot.

not as bad as some other morons.

Please come up with more ideas and save this forum.

Amen...more good comics please.

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Think classy, you'll be classy.

good stuff so far! keep it up man!!

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Okay, Lindsay, are you forgetting that I was a professional twice over - an analyst and a therapist. The world's first analrapist.

I didn't get the first one, and the second one was an over done punch line, but I'm a crusty unhip bastard, so props up to you.

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Guh? Guh.

Your second one was really good! Keep on stripping! =D

Thanks to everyone who said nice or indifferent things about my comics. Here are a couple more about a couple more friends of mine.

Coming Out Party by AccentuateNegative 9-16-03

Of all my friends, I never thought you'd turn out to be the gay one. It wasn't really my choice. But you don't act gay at all and you've had girlfriends. You know how you spent $4,000 to laser the hair on your back, but then it returned anyway? Yeah. It's kinda like that.

Fashion Forward by AccentuateNegative 9-17-03

So why did you finally decide to come out? I just got tired of pretending. That you liked girls? No, that I liked the clothes people bought for me.

its official... you are movin onto the favorites list... well, my favorites anyway. kudos.

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Okay, Lindsay, are you forgetting that I was a professional twice over - an analyst and a therapist. The world's first analrapist.

Yes, kudos...

Well, if you guys are just going to compliment me, I'll just have to post my latest comic. Nice to see this forum isn't always just a bunch of flamewars.

Separate But Equal by AccentuateNegative 9-18-03

So how did you break the news to your girlfriend? I just don't think it's going to work out. I want a lover and a best friend. But that's exactly what I want! Yeah, but my best friend is Steve.

I thought the first two were just "okay," but I really liked the last three. Very good work.

I both laugh and applaud - for the love of humour, continue!

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Carry the battle to them. Don't let them bring it to you. Put them on the defensive. And don't ever apologize for anything. - Harry S Truman, 33rd president of US (1884 - 1972)

The first two didn't move me, but the later ones were very amusing.

You have the little coveted "DMSO seal of approval".

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Well, if you guys are just going to compliment me, I'll just have to post my latest comic. Nice to see this forum isn't always just a bunch of flamewars.

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If only I had the wit to make funny comics. Damn you.

Welcome to stripcreator and to my favorites list. Werd.

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Think classy, you'll be classy.

LOL! Pretty funny! I love it! Very good!

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This account has been seized by order of the Spanish Inquisition.

Add one more compliment to your list. I am really enjoying the second phase of your work.

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Okay, I didn't start off wanting to make a gay comic series, but you gotta give the people what they want. Blame Bravo or overbearing mothers and distant fathers, but here you go...

Cliques by AccentuateNegative 9-21-03

Do you ever go back to your high school or college homecoming games? Nah. Oh, it's great. I was a band fag so I get together with all the other band fags I knew and all the band fags from other classes. I wish you'd use a term other than "band fag." Why? Are you gay? Yes, but not in a marching band kind of way.

It's not only the gay thing, but the things that society does to people, gay or not, and how a few brave men or women can make a difference. However, coming out stories, like Jack's in Dawson's Creek, are enticing because few people dare to defy society's one way street and we admire those who get in the way of Tiananmen tanks. That dude with the yellow PacMan shirt has a neat design and your smart dialogues and brilliant punchlines have brought up the best of him. You have given him a convincing personality and awesome humour. It's like that girl with glasses on MTV, Darla, Marla or whatever, not many variations to show expression but an intensity that accentuates the attitude. OK, I don't understand all that I am saying but I hope you will. ;) I'll just add, that deep inside me I hope that this dude gets to smile someday. Kudos

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