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unbeliever
June 4, 2004 11:51 PM

One more time, fuck mozilla auto-fill!

http://www.stripcreator.com/comics/unbeliever

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evil_d
June 5, 2004 1:09 AM

/comics/unbeliever/234375/

I thought this one was pretty good. Solid humor and an amusing take on the old "Ho ho ho" joke.

Didn't care for the rest. If I could give only one piece of advice to all future strippers, it would be "Random and nonsensical does not equal funny".

Welcome to the site.

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unbeliever
June 5, 2004 10:07 AM

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I thought this one was pretty good. Solid humor and an amusing take on the old "Ho ho ho" joke.

Didn't care for the rest. If I could give only one piece of advice to all future strippers, it would be "Random and nonsensical does not equal funny".

Welcome to the site.



Well my sense of humor is very very dry, usually deadpan and I enjoy the whole uncomfortable silence/pause thing. That's what I personally find amusing. Also I can see how the other two might not work for everybody, being a bit more offensive and in the Jesus strip, blasphemous (from the point of view of a christian anyway hehe).

I appreciate the feedback and I'll try not to get discouraged with my one screw up (the granny one with the auto-fill from the jesus strip, I need to figure out how to turn off the auto-fill for that page). I did like my granny one though, Matlock is always funny. :d

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unbeliever
June 5, 2004 10:57 AM

Okay so I guess I'm going to serialize Skippy the Wonder Dog. Or at least try to. Here is today's work.

/comics/unbeliever/234421/

/comics/unbeliever/234423/

/comics/unbeliever/234424/

To be continued...

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evil_d
June 5, 2004 2:41 PM

I wouldn't worry about being blasphemous. The heathens are in charge around here.

The latest strips are alright. Keep it up.

So what was granny supposed to be saying in the second panel?

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unbeliever
June 5, 2004 8:22 PM

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I wouldn't worry about being blasphemous. The heathens are in charge around here.

The latest strips are alright. Keep it up.

So what was granny supposed to be saying in the second panel?



Nothing. It was supposed to be one of those akward pauses basically. *shrug*

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unbeliever
June 6, 2004 12:43 PM

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NooniePuuBunny
June 6, 2004 2:32 PM

They're slightly amusing.

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possums
June 6, 2004 2:35 PM

I gotta say, I REALLY fucking hate it when people name their comics all one thing. People want to be able to navigate your comics without having to guess a random number. It really pisses me off.

Other than that they're mostly unfunny.

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unbeliever
June 6, 2004 9:14 PM

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I gotta say, I REALLY fucking hate it when people name their comics all one thing. People want to be able to navigate your comics without having to guess a random number. It really pisses me off.

Other than that they're mostly unfunny.



Well they're dated and they auto-sort in order. Not sure how that is so confusing. . . Nevertheless, I will take your advice anyway and add a qualifying tailer to each to idenfity them. Maybe an abbreviation for the name STWD - FIGHT! Round One. Something like that.

As for un-funny, I never claimed I was good, just that I enjoy it. :)

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unbeliever
June 7, 2004 12:20 AM

More blasphemy. This one got a couple of good laughs from friends, but.. well.. they're friends so some opinions from total strangers are welcome. :D

/comics/unbeliever/234896/

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unbeliever
June 7, 2004 10:49 PM

Quick little 2 strip series. More blasphemy!

/comics/unbeliever/235184/

/comics/unbeliever/235185/

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len
June 7, 2004 11:01 PM

I laughed ... at the last three.

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unbeliever
June 9, 2004 10:02 AM

oooh, political now. ;)

/comics/unbeliever/235500/

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unbeliever
June 16, 2004 12:40 PM

More blasphemy!

/comics/unbeliever/237246/

Don't forget to buy the shirt.

:D

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unbeliever
June 22, 2004 10:35 AM

More commentary. :)

/comics/unbeliever/238353/

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