Forum archives » Read My Damn Comics » My comics are disgusting with a hint of racism.

LivingDeadVirus
July 5, 2007 9:34 PM

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HCRoyall
July 6, 2007 4:22 AM

The first and the last ones were kinda funny. The others were just offensive for the sake of being offensive without any redeeming humor.

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LivingDeadVirus
July 6, 2007 12:45 PM

That's kindof what I was going for. I'm glad you liked those two, though. Here's some more:

 /comics/LivingDeadVirus/399341/

/comics/LivingDeadVirus/399342/

/comics/LivingDeadVirus/399343/

/comics/LivingDeadVirus/399382/

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AngryAmerican
July 6, 2007 12:54 PM

lets see here:

Racism: check

Pedophilia: check

Necrophilia: check

Funny:

i don't think i've ever seen someone with so much wasted potential.

normally these are win-win subjects... 

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faggot
July 6, 2007 4:02 PM

Racism and anti-homosexuality isn't really funny unless you're trying to piss people off for hilarious reactions. Stripcreator hardly seems to be the sort of site that's offended easily.

 

Not to say offensive things aren't funny, there just needs to be more punchline.

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LivingDeadVirus
July 6, 2007 7:21 PM

Yeah, people aren't getting as mad as I want them too. Thanks for the help, though, everyone. Anyone have any tips on good punchlines?

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LivingDeadVirus
July 6, 2007 8:47 PM

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Injokester
July 6, 2007 9:01 PM

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LivingDeadVirus wrote:
Yeah, people aren't getting as mad as I want them too. Thanks for the help, though, everyone. Anyone have any tips on good punchlines?

Stick to the basic formulas, that works for me. Just find a comic that's written in a similar way to your own and read it until your brain shuts down. Sooner or later you'll start to think in terms of punchlines and they'll basically write themselves.

Try not to be too gratuitous either- you're not going to offend anyone using a limited set of transparent GIF characters that only have one expression, and it's only killing the humour.

Ironically the woman in the red dress was a girl I knew from a forum that turned out to be an effeminate dude.

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